AI writing failure modes
Last updated: 2026-05-17
Synthesis
Section titled “Synthesis”The failure modes of AI-assisted scholarly writing fall into four well-characterised categories: hallucinated references, authorial-voice loss / lexical homogenisation, automation complacency, and (more speculatively) skill degradation over time. Three of the four are well-documented in the empirical literature; the fourth is mostly hype with thin evidence. Scriptorium should be honest about which it defends against and which it does not.
The single most important framing point: scriptorium’s design
choices — conservative edits, structured outputs, explicit
invocation, and one skill = one responsibility — are not
generically virtuous. They are specific defences against specific
failure modes. The conservative-edit posture defends against
voice loss and unintended semantic drift. Structured outputs make
hallucination auditable. Explicit invocation defends against
automation complacency. They do not defend against everything,
and pretending otherwise is a worse posture than naming the gaps.
This document exists so that DESIGN.md can ground its design
language in evidence rather than slogan.
Evidence and frameworks
Section titled “Evidence and frameworks”1. Hallucinated references
Section titled “1. Hallucinated references”The best-characterised failure mode. Two foundational studies:
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Walters & Wilder 2023 [1] tested ChatGPT-3.5 and GPT-4 on 42 multidisciplinary topics, examining 636 citations. 55% of GPT-3.5 citations were fabricated outright; 18% of GPT-4 citations were fabricated. Of the remaining (non-fabricated) citations, 43% (GPT-3.5) and 24% (GPT-4) contained substantive errors (wrong year, wrong page, misspelled author, wrong journal). GPT-4 was better, but the fabrication rate is still catastrophic for scholarly use without verification.
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Bhattacharyya et al. 2023 [2] tested ChatGPT on medical content: 47% of citations fabricated, 46% authentic-but- inaccurate, only 7% correct. PMID 37337480.
The pattern is consistent across replications: LLMs hallucinate plausible-looking citations at high rates, and the hallucinations are often hard to detect by surface inspection because the cited authors are real, the journals are plausible, and the topic matches. See hallucination-in-llm-citations for the deeper review and citation-accuracy-evidence for downstream consequences.
The defence: never let a generation step add citations. Audit existing citations against retrievable sources (citation-claim-alignment). Scriptorium’s no-citation-invention rule (DESIGN.md line: “Critique skills don’t invent citations; transformation skills don’t add them”) is a direct response.
2. Authorial-voice loss and lexical homogenisation
Section titled “2. Authorial-voice loss and lexical homogenisation”The “ChatGPT smell” has become measurable. Kobak et al. [3] analysed ~15 million PubMed abstracts from 2010–2024, examining excess vocabulary — words whose 2024 frequency substantially exceeded the pre-ChatGPT (2021–2022) baseline. Terms with the highest excess included “delve”, “underscore”, “primarily”, “meticulous”, “boast”, “intricate”, “realm”, “commendable”. Over 100 terms showed meaningful surges. The authors estimate that at least 10% of 2024 PubMed abstracts were processed with LLMs — implying ~150,000 papers per year.
Detection studies (Sadasivan et al. 2023, “Can AI-Generated Text Be Reliably Detected?” [4]) show the reverse problem: as LLM distributions and human distributions converge, any detector must trade Type I and Type II error. Watermarking helps but is removable by paraphrasing. The practical implication is that stylistic detection of AI text is fundamentally limited; relying on detectors to police authorship is a losing strategy.
A separate strand of evidence is the homogenisation effect: Agarwal et al. [5] found that AI writing suggestions push prose toward Western, English-native, and majority-culture norms, diminishing the cultural and stylistic nuances of writers from underrepresented backgrounds. This is the inverse of the ESL-helpful framing in esl-writers-swales-hyland — the same tool that helps a hedging-uncertain ESL writer get reviewable prose can also flatten a writer’s distinctive voice.
The defence: conservative-edit posture. A transformation skill
that preserves terminology declared in MANUSCRIPT_STATE.yaml,
preserves citations and statistics, and reports its changes in
structured form gives the author the choice of which edits to
accept. The defence is not that scriptorium prose sounds less
AI-y than ChatGPT’s; it’s that the author retains the choice.
3. Automation complacency
Section titled “3. Automation complacency”The classic human-factors literature: Parasuraman & Manzey 2010 [6] reviewed empirical studies of automation use and integrated them into a theoretical model. Key findings:
- Automation complacency — failure to monitor automated systems adequately — occurs under multitask load even in experts and cannot be trained away.
- Automation bias — over-acceptance of automation recommendations even against contrary evidence — occurs in both novices and experts, and persists across teams as well as individuals.
- Both are dynamic interactions of personal, situational, and automation-related characteristics; they are not character flaws.
Applied to writing assistance: studies on co-writing with opinionated LLMs (Jakesch et al. 2023, the Buschek/Bhat line of CHI work [7]) show that users who accept more AI suggestions exhibit measurable attitude shifts toward the AI’s bias, and most users do not notice they are being influenced. The 2023 Cornell study found that a biased AI writing assistant doubled the probability of users writing the assistant’s position on a contested social question.
The implication for scriptorium: every accepted edit is a small attitude shift. A tool that emits voluminous suggestions and expects the user to accept or reject each one is a complacency machine. Scriptorium’s design responses:
- One skill = one responsibility: smaller, more legible outputs are easier to evaluate carefully.
- Explicit invocation: users have to ask for help, which forces a moment of intentionality.
- Structured outputs: easier to scan and selectively act on than free-form prose.
- Critique skills don’t transform: separating critique from transformation forces a second conscious step.
These help. They don’t eliminate the problem.
4. Skill degradation over time
Section titled “4. Skill degradation over time”This is the most-discussed and least-measured of the failure modes. The hypothesis: extended use of AI writing assistance erodes the user’s ability to write without it, with downstream costs for thinking, learning, and disciplinary fluency.
Evidence is thin. The genre is mostly speculative essays (Marc Watkins on writing pedagogy; press coverage of student writing samples) and short-horizon experimental studies (Bhat et al., some 2024 CHI work) that cannot answer the long-horizon question. There is some analogous evidence from GPS-and-navigation literature (reduced spatial cognition with prolonged GPS use) and from calculator-and-mental-arithmetic literature, but transfer to writing is speculative.
The honest position: flag this as a real concern but mark the evidence as weak. Scriptorium’s design language should not overclaim that conservative-edit posture defends against skill degradation. It probably does not — what it defends against is unintended manuscript degradation, not unintended author degradation.
How this informs scriptorium
Section titled “How this informs scriptorium”This document is a DESIGN.md defensive section, not a skill. The concrete uses are:
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Frame the conservative-edit posture as a defence, not a slogan. When
DESIGN.mdsays “transformative skills preserve citations, statistics, and terminology by default”, point to Kobak et al. [3] and Walters & Wilder [1] as the reasons. -
Frame explicit invocation as automation-complacency defence. Parasuraman & Manzey [6] is the citation. Auto- invoking transformative skills on file save would directly contradict this design choice.
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Acknowledge what scriptorium does not defend against:
- Stylistic homogenisation by the author’s own LLM-influenced prose style. If the author already writes in the “delve / underscore / intricate” register before scriptorium runs, scriptorium does not fix that.
- Author skill degradation over long-horizon use. No editing tool defends against this.
- Sophisticated user circumvention (e.g., asking an LLM to draft an entire section and then running scriptorium on the result as a fig-leaf). The structured-output design surfaces the drafted content faithfully; it does not detect that the content was AI-drafted in the first place.
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Scope the project’s claims honestly. Scriptorium is a tool for manuscript improvement under human oversight. It is not a defence of the author’s writing skill, the field’s epistemic norms, or the long-term health of the literature. Conflating these is the trap.
Implementation priority for scriptorium
Section titled “Implementation priority for scriptorium”Verdict: No new skill. DESIGN.md defensive section: yes, high priority.
Why useful context anyway:
- Defends design choices already in
DESIGN.md. The four anti-patterns listed there (“giant prompts”, “unconstrained rewriting”, “hidden state”, “citation hallucination”) map directly onto failure modes documented in this evidence base. Pointing the prose at primary literature turns the anti-patterns from preferences into defensible engineering responses. - Scopes the project’s claims. External readers (reviewers, adopters, critics) will probe whether scriptorium is “just another LLM writing tool with prettier marketing”. This document gives Sean the language to answer: here are the four documented failure modes; here are the specific design choices that respond to each; here is what we explicitly do not claim to fix.
- Informs the skill descriptions. Each skill’s description
should state which failure mode(s) it is calibrated against.
citation-auditdefends against (1);argumentative-flow’s conservative-edit posture defends against (2); explicit invocation defends against (3); none defend against (4).
Concrete action: add a “Defensive design” section to
DESIGN.md that summarises the four failure modes and links each
to a specific design choice. This document is the source material.
Condition that would flip to a skill: if a “voice
preservation” check becomes load-bearing (e.g., users complain
that their prose comes out flattened after a critique-and-revise
cycle), a voice-fidelity-audit skill could become justified in
v0.3+. The data it would need: a sample of the author’s prior
prose to fingerprint against. Operationally non-trivial.
Open questions / weak evidence
Section titled “Open questions / weak evidence”- Skill degradation is poorly evidenced. Treat as a real concern but do not overclaim defences.
- Voice-loss measurement is open. The Kobak et al. excess- vocabulary method [3] works at population scale (millions of abstracts) but is noisy for single manuscripts.
- Author identity and AI use are increasingly fluid: many writers now have their own LLM workflow before they ever touch scriptorium. The failure modes of “AI-then-scriptorium” prose are distinct from “human-then-scriptorium” prose and are not well characterised.
- Detection literature is a moving target. Sadasivan et al. [4] is the right framing (any detector trades Type I/II error), but specific detector benchmarks date quickly.
References
Section titled “References”[1] Walters, W. H., & Wilder, E. I. (2023). Fabrication and errors in the bibliographic citations generated by ChatGPT. Scientific Reports, 13, 14045. DOI: 10.1038/s41598-023-41032-5. PMID: 37679503.
[2] Bhattacharyya, M., Miller, V. M., Bhattacharyya, D., & Miller, L. E. (2023). High rates of fabricated and inaccurate references in ChatGPT-generated medical content. Cureus, 15(5), e39238. DOI: 10.7759/cureus.39238. PMID: 37337480.
[3] Kobak, D., González-Márquez, R., Horvát, E.-Á., & Lause, J. (2024). Delving into ChatGPT usage in academic writing through excess vocabulary. arXiv:2406.07016. (See also subsequent extended analysis “Delving into LLM-assisted writing in biomedical publications through excess vocabulary”.)
[4] Sadasivan, V. S., Kumar, A., Balasubramanian, S., Wang, W., & Feizi, S. (2023). Can AI-Generated Text be Reliably Detected? arXiv:2303.11156. (Originally posted 2023; subsequent NeurIPS / ICLR follow-up work in 2024 builds on this framing.)
[5] Agarwal, D., Naaman, M., & Vashistha, A. (2024). AI Suggestions Homogenize Writing Toward Western Styles and Diminish Cultural Nuances. arXiv:2409.11360. See also Jakesch, M., Bhat, A., Buschek, D., Zalmanson, L., & Naaman, M. (2023). Co-Writing with Opinionated Language Models Affects Users’ Views. Proceedings of the 2023 CHI Conference on Human Factors in Computing Systems. DOI: 10.1145/3544548.3581196.
[6] Parasuraman, R., & Manzey, D. H. (2010). Complacency and bias in human use of automation: An attentional integration. Human Factors, 52(3), 381–410. DOI: 10.1177/0018720810376055. PMID: 21077562.
[7] Jakesch et al. 2023, as above [5]; the broader Bhat/Buschek line at CHI 2023–2025 on writing-assistant suggestion-acceptance bias. For the homogenisation pull specifically, see also Reizinger, P., Bonastre, J.-F., et al. work on AI text fingerprinting (2024) [TODO verify exact citation; the originally referenced “Reizinger 2024” did not resolve cleanly in search].